Thanks for sharing your description of ANZAC Ted. I like how you have described that he is said looking as I agree with that. A next step is to use your imagination and describe how you think a 100 year old bear might smell. Musty comes to mind for me.
I love that you added in the pictures for effects.
I like how you have used pictures with your description. I also liked how you shared that you thought he was nice lovely teddy and would give peace to all the men who went to war...I wonder how your teddy would do this? By giving hugs to them all, by smiling at them all...Maybe you could tell us a little more about this as bringing peace to the went would be a very important thing during those times.
It would be helpful if you give us a wee blurb, above your google drawing, about the task you are sharing eg: Tell us what the task was for this writing activity.
Hi Logan,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your description of ANZAC Ted. I like how you have described that he is said looking as I agree with that. A next step is to use your imagination and describe how you think a 100 year old bear might smell. Musty comes to mind for me.
I love that you added in the pictures for effects.
Regards,
Mrs B.
Hi Logan
ReplyDeleteI like how you have used pictures with your description. I also liked how you shared that you thought he was nice lovely teddy and would give peace to all the men who went to war...I wonder how your teddy would do this? By giving hugs to them all, by smiling at them all...Maybe you could tell us a little more about this as bringing peace to the went would be a very important thing during those times.
It would be helpful if you give us a wee blurb, above your google drawing, about the task you are sharing eg: Tell us what the task was for this writing activity.
Mrs Ealam