Tuesday 10 March 2020

Flush Time

Our class was doing a poem about the worst thing we have done in our life.



I have flushed the toilet
that was freshly peed in

And which you were probably
gonna think that I wouldn't flush it

Forgive me that I dirtied it just after you cleaned it

It felt so good to do a big dump

1 comment:

  1. Oh yuck Logan! What a funny topic to write about. I like how you worded the line "Forgive me that I dirtied it just after you cleaned it." I'm quite pleased you don't have an illustration too.
    Keep up the great writing.

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