Tuesday 11 June 2019

8 comments:

  1. Wow Logan! You are very clever at telling a story through Stop Motion Animation. Your character is wonderful at taming wild and scary animals. I like the part when your character shook the palm tree and got supplies to create a raft! That reminded me of mine craft when you put things in the crafting table and make different items. You may need to alter the size of your slide show as it comes off the page a little. Keep up the great work and I look forward to seeing what happens next for your character.

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  2. cool i love how you have put difrent places in it. :3 10/10

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  3. Hi Logan It is Zoe here you have to Mack your sma smaller.

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  4. no I do not and I am not making my sma samller zoe

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  5. Hi logan it's Oliver I really like your sma could you make it longer.

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  6. Hi Logan, I'm Sam from Kokatahi - Kowhitirangi School. I think it's really cool but maybe next time you could make it slightly shorter. Why did you make it so long? It is nice but there is still to many slides. I think you should also make some slides saying what it is about.

    Blog You Later

    Sam

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