WOW!! Logan this is such an amazing poem!! You have really described what it would have been like for the soldiers. The loud bang, bang, the mud the pain and how you end with 'many fallen soliders never to return home'.
They way you have presented this with the poppies and the tank helps me to feel where this poem is coming from.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful pease of work.
Hi Logan The first word that came to my mind was exactly the same as Mrs Baileys- WOW! What an incredible job you and mum have done with this poem. The words you have selected to use throughout your poem are very precise and have purpose to portrait a message of war. I felt a real feeling of being there in the moment as I read your poem, welldone for capturing the experience of life at war so well. Mrs Ealam
WOW!! Logan this is such an amazing poem!! You have really described what it would have been like for the soldiers. The loud bang, bang, the mud the pain and how you end with 'many fallen soliders never to return home'.
ReplyDeleteThey way you have presented this with the poppies and the tank helps me to feel where this poem is coming from.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful pease of work.
Regards,
Mrs B.
Hi Logan
ReplyDeleteThe first word that came to my mind was exactly the same as Mrs Baileys- WOW!
What an incredible job you and mum have done with this poem. The words you have selected to use throughout your poem are very precise and have purpose to portrait a message of war. I felt a real feeling of being there in the moment as I read your poem, welldone for capturing the experience of life at war so well.
Mrs Ealam